Snow White- a poem by me

[divan]

I wrote this poem earlier this year. tell me what you think and if you can connect with it in your own way. Feel free to explain.


Snow white- by Divan Olivier

Our alliance my friend
Has come to an end
Like every year that passes by
with snow flaking from the sky

I reap the blizzard annually
Mountains melting silently
In wonderland t’was you and I
The icing on the apple pie

An acorn fell on Captain Jack’s clandestine zone
A juddering quake the impact made
The branches called out a knowing cry
They warned us of a cracking tie

As ice turns to water
And mud turns to dust
Our flavour has faltered
It’s broken our crust

[Sindënís*~]

That's beautiful, Divan Each sentence really flows into the other.
It's a bit sad also, it reminds me of a good friend I once had, but lost because we grew apart.

[Saar°berry]

That's really a beautiful poem, Divan!
I especially love the first verse. Very intense.
Thanks for sharing!

[divan]

Thank you, I got the inspiration to write it while I was listening to "Bells for her"