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Post by Smurph on Mar 25, 2004 17:22:38 GMT -5
I havent been around much have I? Its far easier to express mysef indirectly than to try and explain where I am at the moment. This is what I've been up to anyway..
Broken and tangled Lying like a victim of abuse Like unity turned against itself Like a love become recluse It showed its face so long ago A child with eyes so green The rot set in like its never been And was never seen again You cant take away what was never there What I never learned how to feel You can try and pretend we had something What you think we have was never real, so unreal
I feel you in my veins, every time I curse I see your anger in my eyes Every time I cry your spirit weighs me down, like your coat of arms What poisons my blood is what lives in you, my contempt for every cell What lives in me comes from you, its taking me straight to hell
What’s to say when there’s nothing left A hollow point to a meaningless verse What’s the point of honesty When the only truth I have hurts So when you’re looking down, watching my sins The father beside you, the quiet within Will you finally make your peace I know I’ve made mine When I close my eyes I can see him Un-jaded by passion or fear His smile like mine but un-cynical For the boy I shed a tear.
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Post by shiseidored on Mar 25, 2004 20:37:37 GMT -5
That was so very beutiful I love it,and i feel were you are coming from with that poem i realy do
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Post by Smurph on Apr 9, 2004 16:02:54 GMT -5
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Post by shiseidored on Apr 9, 2004 19:48:44 GMT -5
;DWe likey....
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siren
Nautical Twilight
a simpleton could see that you're the only one for me
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Post by siren on Apr 10, 2004 0:30:08 GMT -5
thats really good!! i wish i could write stuff like that
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Post by bugg on Apr 11, 2004 4:22:36 GMT -5
That's so beautiful Smurph! I'm putting it on repeat. :love:
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Post by Smurph on Apr 11, 2004 6:55:47 GMT -5
Aww thankyou buggie! (Dont put it on repeat tho or you'll start to notice the mistakes!)
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Post by Saar°berry on Apr 13, 2004 9:13:55 GMT -5
thats really good!! i wish i could write stuff like that DITTO!!!
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