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Post by airotica on Dec 26, 2006 12:31:50 GMT -5
what can i say,. i',m a writer! ^_^
11:45 p.m.
She's laying down her blade such a tantalizing feeling she's praying for a way out sharp edges and a beautiful disaster occurs Darkness roams at her feet is she afraid? She leaps unto Lucifer's wing Crimson glistens againts fragile blue threads Pallid skin amorphous figures She looks back at her ephemeral life she wonders why 11:45 pm Game over... almost a sea after a strom awakens to a bed and gown this confusion of why she still writes her story She can't understand moving on 2 years later she still wonders why..
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Post by tinustori on Dec 26, 2006 13:54:49 GMT -5
Lovely
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Post by annemarieirene on Jan 9, 2007 4:09:24 GMT -5
The last line hit me like a ton of bricks.
"2 years later, and she still wonders why."
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