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Feb 12, 2004 19:39:32 GMT -5
Post by shiseidored on Feb 12, 2004 19:39:32 GMT -5
Said his name was truth dressed as a lier said his going to take me to that place of internal fire said his going to hate me, all of my days said hell come back when i change Said her name was lier dressed as truth said she's going to to take me to that place where all is white said shell stay by my side wrong or right said she wont let me give up this fight she knows i wont feel like stopping tonight day by day as i fight good with bad i remind myself of what is to be had.. wether it be wrong or right ....im looking inside to see my light .. *just something i made up on the spot* :-*Candy
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Feb 13, 2004 13:19:31 GMT -5
Post by Saar°berry on Feb 13, 2004 13:19:31 GMT -5
*sigh* I wish I could write poems just like that... I absolutely can't write poems... But like reading them tho.
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Feb 13, 2004 23:04:43 GMT -5
Post by shiseidored on Feb 13, 2004 23:04:43 GMT -5
Ah but you are so great at so many things..Sometimes writting poetry is a sort of gift that comes through your heart out to your hands straight to paper(or here)you dont realy get time to think hmm does this go?Will that be ok...it just spills out,your not i believe anyway meant to edit your poems so much..You write what you directly feel at the time.. But you express your thoughts and expressions so well Rasp without needing to write poems and such
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Feb 14, 2004 14:27:20 GMT -5
Post by Saar°berry on Feb 14, 2004 14:27:20 GMT -5
Ah but you are so great at so many things..Sometimes writting poetry is a sort of gift that comes through your heart out to your hands straight to paper(or here)you dont realy get time to think hmm does this go?Will that be ok...it just spills out,your not i believe anyway meant to edit your poems so much..You write what you directly feel at the time.. But you express your thoughts and expressions so well Rasp without needing to write poems and such ;D
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pandora
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Feb 14, 2004 18:46:41 GMT -5
Post by pandora on Feb 14, 2004 18:46:41 GMT -5
that poem reminded me of somethingmy grandma onced told me whenever I felt sad I'll say it once, I'll say it many times....just amazing...you should get these published
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Feb 15, 2004 2:03:14 GMT -5
Post by shiseidored on Feb 15, 2004 2:03:14 GMT -5
Juanita... That is such a huge complament... ... Your Grandmother must of been a very wise women ;D And im happy that you felt that from reading my poem
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