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Post by zerogirl on Feb 19, 2004 11:02:02 GMT -5
Well, I wanted to add a few of my poems here. They don't always make sense and they are generally very short. Don't know why this is...and they never really have titles either.
I don't know how I ended up in a crossword puzzle moving up and across. Ended up helping a bird fly to freedom while I sat silently still. When the door opens, I already know who comes in. I've eaten my share of guilt.
To write the words is an effort, a confession I can't give. I'm so afraid to falter, that I don't know how to live. I always thought I was so strong, to whom do I blame this hell?
Counting every minute and every hour just so I can hear your voice. Too much time is left for me to build false hopes and expectations. I don't have much to say, but I still want to hear your voice.
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Post by shiseidored on Feb 19, 2004 20:04:55 GMT -5
Nat,they are beautiful Dont ever stop writing them,i like the smallness of them to,makes them more intimate and an impact...as far as poetry goes..thankyou!
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Post by bugg on Feb 21, 2004 11:36:30 GMT -5
They sound very sincere and heartfelt, that can be a good poem by definition
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